Take Me

i just want something that takes me,

makes it difficult and simple;

all in one breath.

I just need someone to take me,

farther than I've been,

farther than i am now,

oh please show me how,

how.

Take me by the hand,

guide me through these woods,

just ignore the crackling,

just ignore the sounds.

we can go further,

we can go deeper,

deeper than these streams,

just say the words.

Run away with me,

no postcards or boundaries,

we can stop wherever,

or fly higher up the tree.

follow through the forest,

pick up your feet,

just over the glacier,

there's so much more to see.

Take me by the hand,

guide me through these woods,

just ignore the crackling,

just ignore the sounds.

we can go further,

we can go deeper,

deeper than these streams,

just say the words,

and we'll leave.

Reviews

[Levi Levin]

I enjoyed the adventure as I read this piece. Great job!!!

[Hi]

Few are as confident/vulnerable to go on such a journey with another, but when it works it's magical. A nice piece. Thanks.

[Katerina Grev]

Don't we all wish to just leave and explore the unknown? You did a fantastic job capturing the desire to want to go out and explore the world that awaits. I enjoyed this piece very much.

[Pete]

we all want those woods. i really enjoyed this. there is an honest, deep beauty in your thoughts & words. nice job.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful use of words and thoughts.
"we can go further,
we can go deeper,
deeper than these streams,"
The above lines. Words, a lover want to hear. Thank you Bryanna for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Bryanna]

thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Bryanna.

[WoodenChair]

"just say the words" i'm not planning on saying them, just curious, what are the words?