Savour the Moonlight

A glimpse into the state of unconsciousness. A glimpse into the moonlight

Where on earth am I?

I thought as I lie.

Is it the end?

Which part did it rend?

It hurts so much,

Hell at every touch.

Am I in darkness?

The strength that I harness,

can only get me through,

to lift a finger or two.

My memories are vague, 

As fragile as an egg.

Even then I sense hope, 

No reasons to mope.

I struggle to fight,

to savour the moonlight.

I lie as I cry,

Where on earth am I?

Reviews

[Ars Goetia Poetry]

This is great, I can truly relate. Thanks for sharing :)

[bryantvh]

Thanks for the review! =)

[Ars Goetia Poetry]

You're welcome :)

[Demii]

This is very good poem for someone who feels lost, it has a good sense of hope and struggle to get out of a tough situation, its a really good peice.

[bryantvh]

Thanks :) love your works too!