Deleted

And then there are the little things that cut like a knife,

realizing you keep erasing me from your life.

Rip out a page

here

or

there,

delete me till your memory is bare.

A locked door with a thrown away key,

no place for contact no chance for repair,

through watery eyes i can somehow see,

I’m the only

one

who still cares.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think and if there is anything you'd change.
Thanks,
Brandon

Reviews

[KaySea]

amazing

[Magic;)]

incredible, it has an interesting lay out, just to start out, and it really lets you feel the invisible nature of memory, and other things.... aka a really long way of saying i loved it :)

[Tasha]

Nothing needs to change, I liked the added space it added more emotion to it. Wonderful write.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Sindhuja Seshadri]

Even the spaces add to the meaning. Wonderfully felt and transmitted into writing. :)

[.nicole.]

I wouldnt change a thing, you get the point across beautifully. wonderful job.

[Kat]

the way you set it up adds a lot to the piece. good job! (:

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I like the message of absolute defraction from stirring grasp's the frailed edges of a page really do tell more of a story, well done, good read.