The Old World, and A New Begining

This is kind of a story about why I'm on here and why my story is how it is at this moment

I once was a very happy man
Free spirit, happy, and joyful
All but a day ago, i was these things
Then the old ruler of my life
Destroyed my whole world

I left the old world
To start a new
Get away from it all
and forget about all the strife
Move on, and be a burden somewhere else

I never felt like i belonged somewhere
I felt like i drifted from place to place
And this proves it
I do not belong
Nor will i ever be

I move on to this new place
To see if i can make new friends
And not make the same mistakes as i have
I call them mistakes
But it's only a broken heart...

I've done nothing wrong
My life puts me through to much
I am a good guy
But i can not catch a break
Such as my life...

Reviews

[The Chosen Poet]

In Life, being good only comes with two options, you chew or get chewed, it's very repulsive sometimes being good, i can relate to this peace and after i read it, my darkness had a vivid light of hope. it's a beautiful true piece

Sean

[Wolfwind]

Life exists to toss us down so we can bounce back better than before! I've been on that yo yo ride a time or two. I know it works. =) Welcome to the WC. You've got some good heartfelt poetry!

This piece keeps it real on the emotional wheel. It's not to heavy, not to light... just right for a smooth flow of feeling ink. It's well crafted with a good pace. It certainly gets across the idea behind it.

Thanks for sharing your craft!
Aaron - Wolfwind

[shallimarRose]

Welcome to the Cafe'. I am sure you will find many wonderful friends and fellow poets and poetess's here willing to read and befriend you. I enjoy your writing and think you do have something here.. Break-ups are very difficult especially at a young age when you cannot yet see the whole picture. shallimarRose