Content Warning

Content Warning

A Poem by bubbafreesnake

Nudity, sex, smoking. 

Who cares? 

Smoking was never his thing, 

But it didn’t bother him either. 

 
His significant other had smoked. 
 
After they were married  
He noted the prize stacked up behind her trumpeting 
Addiction, domination, bondage, wah wah wah 
In a coronation photograph of Miss Montclair. 
 
“What happened to ‘the lifetime of cigarettes,” he had asked? 
I smoked them-- all,” she said sweetly. 

© 2025 bubbafreesnake


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I like the irony of the last stanza, as well as the description of her. This is very well written:)

Posted 4 Months Ago


bubbafreesnake

4 Months Ago

Your comment is appreciated, Nico. Bubba
waddayagonnado!? eh? a fault he accepted for a lifetime ... such irony in her humorous reply .. "I smoked them-- all" .. i like the underlying parody about warnings the go without heeding .. there is a price to be paid :(
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bubbafreesnake

1 Year Ago

That's how it has been for me, anyway. Thanks for the comment, Bubba.
i really liked this piece.
a coexisting. symbiotic life together.
{both loving the other. as they are.}

Posted 2 Years Ago


bubbafreesnake

2 Years Ago

Thank you for the review, living lavender, Bubba.
I've never seen a happy union of smoker and non smoker

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bubbafreesnake

3 Years Ago

I agreed with your remark, Ciara, until I realized that the only couple, I knew that stayed together.. read more
Ciara

3 Years Ago

Well I said happy Union not lasting union. :)
But I suppose it's also true that love is blin.. read more
Pretty good story. Thank you so much

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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bubbafreesnake

2 Years Ago

Thank you Heravinluca.
Bubba
Very well written, thought provoking as well,
My ex husband smoked but i didn't and well i don't know how i managed to escape that,
I enjoyed this write....

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bubbafreesnake

2 Years Ago

Thanks Lessa, Bubba.

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