Me with Wings

A dream I had

The cliff is tall, a thousand feet in the air
The wind is blowing hard….
I take one last deep breath as I jump,
I begin to fall,
faster I keep falling,
Until the end is near
I spread my wings and fly this is why I am here
Up above every one is so very exciting
I wish I were like this everyday so I could stay on hiding
As I soar through the air I laugh and laugh and laugh
I don’t know why I laugh, it just happens to be
Finally I have no one to worry about so I can just be me
Of course me flying doesn’t last forever I  wake up all hot and sweaty.
I wish my life were like my dream so I could be my self

Reviews

[Time's The Bond]

An inspiring piece

[Solis-Lopez]

aww i liked that. talking about dreams through your poems is a very good way to write, whether they be ambitious dreams or nighttime dreams.
the rhyming was very quite lyrical and that made me want to read it more =D
u sure have a fan out of me, i hope to see more of your poems and stories

[Enigma]

WOW!!! I really like this piece.You've expressed your dream and your thoughts very well.And yeah! Even I wish to fly.That way, I won't need to pay to travel by air.LOLZ.....
Anyway, it's skillfully written.....GREAT JOB!!!