Elegance

Elegance personified, we ease ourselves into a roadside bistro

Sunlight shrinking your hazel flecked pupils

Our souls interlacing thier tendrils

Reeling from this rushing ecstacy of nirvana

We exchange lace tinted glances whilst holding hands

Across a thousand mile divide, we still connect

For it's moments like these miracles happen

And to think it's only 3 weeks since we met

Yet like snow coloured swans we're forever mated

Joined together as one beneath azure framed skies

You order the steak - rare with iced water

And I slip inside you and concur

For this day has no beginning and no end

Two souls sowing their vision of hope

Writing their screenplay in droplets of love

On tissue thin paper blessed from above

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Romantic and brimful of joy and hope. I very much enjoyed the poetic expression and imagery in your stanzas. Delightful reading. Pleased I stopped by BB73.

Chris

[Buddhistboy73]

Thanks for the kind review Chris...
I enjoyed writing it and glad you got something from it...:)

BB73

[Paul Michael Kelly]

I really enjoyed this. You've written yourself an interlaced storm of feelings in these simple sentences.
The multi-sensed nature of life shines through your words. Elation, hope, boundless joy. This piece of work shines....

[Buddhistboy73]

Cheers Paul
Glad you enjoyed the poem ....

BB73

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous work. Powerful writing.

[Buddhistboy73]

Thanks for the review brother....

[Persona]

Really good. I love the hazel flecked pupils line. I only dislike the 'slip inside you and concur' because 'concur' - I don't know, they agree what exactly? The line is crude compared to the beauty and depth of the rest of the poem, like the swans.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Beautiful sweet Poet! Such tenderness in you voice. I love it!

[BorealPoet]

Very interesting, I like it!

[Quill~]

Simply enchanting. "Two souls sowing their vision of hope"- lovely words! :)

[Buddhistboy73]

Many Thanks Quill....
'tis appreciated..:)
BB

[JenniferMarie]

beautiful. nice word choices and imagery.

Thank you,
Jen

[Buddhistboy73]

Hey Jen,
Thanks for stopping by....:) And glad you enjoyed the poem.....:)
I'll check your words soon....
BB

[sasha]

This poem and Waves I now have read, they both are written in a major key, and it impresses me, and that is my very positive response!

[Buddhistboy73]

Hey Sasha. Thank You for stopping by to review my poem. I'm not sure what it means major key, but glad you had a positive response...:) Take care....
BB