Elegance

Elegance personified, we ease ourselves into a roadside bistro

Sunlight shrinking your hazel flecked pupils

Our souls interlacing thier tendrils

Reeling from this rushing ecstacy of nirvana

We exchange lace tinted glances whilst holding hands

Across a thousand mile divide, we still connect

For it's moments like these miracles happen

And to think it's only 3 weeks since we met

Yet like snow coloured swans we're forever mated

Joined together as one beneath azure framed skies

You order the steak - rare with iced water

And I slip inside you and concur

For this day has no beginning and no end

Two souls sowing their vision of hope

Writing their screenplay in droplets of love

On tissue thin paper blessed from above

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Such a perfect way of penning the joining of two souls. I love the part where you write about it only being 3 weeks since we met, because I believe that when two people are truly connected time has no boundary. There is a palpable emotional quality to this write that really got to the heart of me. The imagery is fantastic, and the flow was amazing. Nicely done!

[Buddhistboy73]

Thank You my friend...:)

[DaniElle LaPointe]

What is with you and lace? Just askin.... INTERLACING, LACE.... it is also in your poem good evening sugar.... ;)

Makes me ponder the significance of lace in our culture... Both as fashion and decor.

:D

[Buddhistboy73]

Hey DaniElle....many thanks for your lacy review....:) And I hope that your worktop is resplendent with glasses of sweet chardonnay....;)
BB

[DaniElle LaPointe]

Worktop.... Lol. :D

[Buddhistboy73]

Well, let me know if you fancy popping over for a glass of finest chardonnay...;)
long flight though! lol.......so you don't like lace then?

[Deuces]

Wow. This is passion, pain, love's expectation all in one. The bittersweet honeymoon stage of new love... nothing can beat it.

Enjoyed this piece, Sir.

[Buddhistboy73]

Thanks my friend. It was an enjoyable write too.

[Harrisen Viator]

I like how the imagery of this poem is graceful, I can feel the peace when I read it. Very well written, dude.
Harrisen

[Buddhistboy73]

Cheers bro. Appreciate the review...BB

[Ruth]

I love the surrealness to this, I am going to love your work :)

[Buddhistboy73]

Hey PoppySilver, thanks for stopping by to review "elegance".....it#s appreciated..:)
BB

[Ruth]

Most welcome and thank you too!

[Relic]

There's nothing like a good detailed poem to guide us along. I like the scenario you've set up and the various images that are infused within each stanza. This is very good writing, I'm envious of your talent. Great stuff.

[Buddhistboy73]

Many thanks for stopping by my friend,....it's appreciated.
BB

[Relic]

My pleasure.

[Tate Morgan]

Ah young love it hurts to even think of it lol I can say we all know this feeling some of us oh too well Very nice

[Buddhistboy73]

Hi Tate. Thanks for taking the time to review....:)
BB

[Tate Morgan]

you are welcome

[redflutterby]

I love the whole poem but the last four lines are pure heaven!! Beautiful emotion! :-)

[Buddhistboy73]

Hey my friend. Thanks for stopping by to review...:)
BB

[Eric Cox]

Nicely done imagery and romance. Good to read. Nice pen upon this.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You have weaved a dreamy cloud of reverie...one in which I can feel the enchanting connection between the miles....

"Joined together as one beneath azure framed skies" ~ truly a lovely scenario you have built in my mind.
So romantic!... loved this piece,BB...I can read this over and over again.~xo~

[Buddhistboy73]

Hey Robbie. Many thanks for the kind review (as always). Yeah, I can feel the connection too....and I enjoyed writing this piece. BB

[Robbie~xoxo~]

and I enjoyed reading this piece... Lovely write!~xo~:)