Elegance

Elegance personified, we ease ourselves into a roadside bistro

Sunlight shrinking your hazel flecked pupils

Our souls interlacing thier tendrils

Reeling from this rushing ecstacy of nirvana

We exchange lace tinted glances whilst holding hands

Across a thousand mile divide, we still connect

For it's moments like these miracles happen

And to think it's only 3 weeks since we met

Yet like snow coloured swans we're forever mated

Joined together as one beneath azure framed skies

You order the steak - rare with iced water

And I slip inside you and concur

For this day has no beginning and no end

Two souls sowing their vision of hope

Writing their screenplay in droplets of love

On tissue thin paper blessed from above

Reviews

[Yellow Butterfly]

This was a joy to read and has appealled to all of my senses..

I can taste your words as they melt in my mind. I can see how you perceive the essence of beauty by the way you have conveyed your words with dignity. I can smell the sweetness of your desires overflowing from your quill. I can hear your words loud and clear as they scream from the pages of your heart and I am touched with this insightful intrusion of your soul.

Simply breathtaking my friend......

YB

"Elegance is when the inside is as beautiful as the outside. ~Coco Chanel"

[Buddhistboy73]

Hey YB.
Thanks for stopping by to review...:) Glad you enjoyed....:)
BB

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

Hopeful , real, and romantic .

Nicely written poem

[Buddhistboy73]

Thanks!

[Storm K.]

This is absolutely, magnificently wonderful. Definitely going into my library! I love how you mirror the elegance you write about in the poem with the way the poem is written - was this done on purpose? Beautiful imagery, incredible word use. You really know how to draw the reader in, manipulate the sentence structures to make a brilliant effect. My only suggestion would be to put in punctuation to keep the poem's rhythm, such as:
"across a thousand mile divide, we still connect"
The comma just gives a good pause.
Great poem! :)

[Buddhistboy73]

Thanks for the great review my friend...:) Had fun writing it too. And thanks for the constructive advice too. glad to hear all feedback so I can improve..:)

[quinfinn]

wonderfully worded, this is exquisite. a beautiful portrait of the innocence and euphoria of a blossoming love. some of these lines are drop-dead gorgeous, but the last two lines are a poem of beauty all by themselves. outstanding!

[Buddhistboy73]

Cheers fella! Appreciate the review as always.....hope you're well.
BB