it you and me.

you and me

 

It was brisky outside and the only

thing that could warm me up was you next to me.

 

you held me tight and made me laugh, you made me laugh

at your jokes and i never exepected you to be the one i

liked.

 

i mean you the educated one and me your little barefooted

country girl.

 

it was all rapped up that night you were the one for me

but she was is in the way and now when i walk past you i wish you were

mine i wish that we could love.

 

for she hurt you; but me i wouldnt let you down

Reviews

[Fallen Angel]

Short and to the point I definately loooooooove it.

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

very nice corbin. I most, most of your poems are of struggles with love, but it is not bad. I like that you let out those feelings. I hope this guy realizes just how much you care about it, it seems,in the poem, that he often overlooks any feelings you may have for him. I miss you!

~may