Low-Life

subject/mood - hurt/anger

You know, you really disgust me.

With your filthy lies, & hating eyes,

You leave me with a bitter taste

Of the selfishness you have inside.

 

 

 

You leave me with a burning anger;

Raging, clawing, picking at my brain.

The blasphemy spewing out your dirty mouth

Haunts me again, again, & again

 

 

 

Once friends, brother & sister

We claimed we’d always be

But you replaced me with your grubby w***e

Who dances for you as you sleep.

 

 

 

Spinning about, in a whirlwind of sin

You ravage everything and everyone in sight.

Caring only for your moment of pleasure,

You don’t give a crap about doing what’s right.

 

 

 

Using, is what you do.

You use, you use, you use.

If you obtain your cheap gratification,

You care not what others lose.

 

 

 

Your tongue spins a web -

A web of despicable untruths.

While others may fall prey to your savagery

To succumb to this, I refuse. 

 

Lindsey

July 17, 2009

Author's Note

very rough, no editing, feel free to critique

Reviews

[Butterflymom]

Anger can be a great motivator !!! This is an intense and heartfelt piece. Nicely done!

[Eagle Cruagh]

You know, i get the feeling you don`t care for that guy.

A cute poem, full of passion .

I rush off to read more of your energetic poems.

My rating---- 100 %

------ Eagle Cruagh

[Wolfe Greytome]

If this is what you consider rough, I can't wait to see the final polish.