thief

the grammar sucks, but what do you think?

The heat of my tears

Permeating the room

Like a slow, but potent poison

Creeping behind and under me

To expel the life from my very being

My heart thumps heavily

And achingly slow.

So slow, the dragging pace alarms me

Stopping, grasping, breathing deeply

I fall to my knees, gasping for air

The darkness slowly stealing,

Thieving my sight, my smile, my joy

My very life and being

Author's Note

grammar sucks. i'm frustrated. what do you think of the idea, though?

Reviews

[gb.]

I enjoyed this piece thoroughly. Keep it up!