maybe, just maybe

about you.

this is me noticing the way you havnt shaved

and the badge on your chest

{although you cant play anymore}

this is me seeing your knuckles 

and the necklace hanging just to the left

{yingyang, your missing a bead}

this is me hearing your heartbeat 

and knowing how comic sans MS should read

{because sometimes you need a keyboard to say it}

this is me tasting roll-your-own

and this mornings coffee-milk-two-sugars on your lips

{you promise to give up, your doing ok}

this is me smelling your aftershave 

{i know you havnt shaved}

and fresh air and mud on your top

{you havnt played in that team for years}

and this is me realising that yeah,

maybe i do love you.

Author's Note

does the repation work or not? please?

Reviews

[Kasey Jones]

I really like this. The repetition is great, it makes it interesting. Just a minor thing: you used the wrong "your"; it should be "you're doing ok" and "you're missing a bead" . And it's "haven't"