Mystery Woman

Mystery Woman

 

Who is she

the one just there

hair slightly blowing in the wind

her perfume lingering in the air

a single rose is her mark

unfortunately that is all I have

Can you help me find her again

for she has something of mine

she has stolen my heart

right out from under me

In a wave of passion

through locked lips

I must have lost myself for a moment

never before has this happened to me

swept off my feet

My spirit is lifted to an eternal bliss

I am weightless

all the fears once feared

gone by now never to come again

Oh you must find her for me

I will pay any amount asked

she is a priceless gem

in a world crowded with &%!*

Too late now

she has escaped me

a lock of hair to remember her by

a tease she is

breaker of hearts she is

I didn't deserve her anyway

I deserve the tramp in the corner

hey wait a minute

that's her right there

Oh damn these masquerades to hell

Reviews

[Voice]

I love it. This is such a beautiful and well flowing piece. Your imagery is magnificent. His feelings for this girl are pure and romantic yet said for she can't see him. Great piece!!!

Voice

[Angelic Darkness]

Your words have this twisted air about them...making them not
what they seem. To me, this poem says I've loved, lost, and now
I hate women and feel insecure. It's like there are two sides to the writer.

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[Rain]

You are very good with unique endings. I had to smile at this one.
A minor absence of a letter/ "I deserve the tramp i the corner." Good work. Rain..

[Emmie]

Ha Ha! That ended with wonderful humor! I have felt this way before, as many others probobly have too. It was a great twist to the end of the poem. Have fun with your words a little, no need to be extremely abstract. =) Great write, keep writing!!!!