I Used to Know You

They say i'm a mistake

They make me feel same,

I feel useless when they are near. 

Why do they torcher me with their words

We were the best of friends. 

You used to be an angel

Now you are a demon,

Underworld creatures lurking

Reviews

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Well, there's a spelling mistake... I think you meant "shame" and not "same"
Other than that, I like it. It's amazing, how fast an image of someone you think you know can be shattered, once you really see them for what they are. Nice work.

[BlaqkShadow]

Very imaginative, and clearly an emotional piece. I like the imagery you have used. The only thing I would suggest is quickly spell checking before publishing (I make mistakes too don't worry about it). I really like this poem and I want all writers work to be the best it can be so that's why I suggest a spell check (torcher - torture, lerking - lurking). :D