Falling

Sort of my life description dealing with family.

Falling 

Falling into an abyss unknown,

I begin to ponder what is known,

For what the world would be

without me?

Peace, harmony, respect aware,

People that love,

people who care?

Then I stare,

The temperature rising towards the gates of hell,

Down, down I go,

I guess we'll find out after all

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

This could be read in many ways, I just hope i found the right path, I felt more longing than anything else.

[Connor Burns]

Dark, yet satisfying. It has an essence of depression and i feel your pain. I really enjoy this poem and its better than most i've read. You should write more.