Misused

I heard you say you love me

But that’s not what I see

You’ve stolen my heart

And ripped it in two

Then you try to comfort me

 

You wonder why I hate you

Why I always feel so blue

But you don’t consider

The part you play

The horrid things you do

 

You’re not quite so innocent

But I know you won’t admit it

Your moves are just

Your counsel wise

There’s no need for your repentance

 

And yet you say its me you love

That I’m some gift sent from above

But you just misuse

To get your way

Because that’s all you think of

 

I want it all to be okay

To keep these feelings far at bay

But I don’t know how

To balance this out

As it all falls out of place

Author's Note

If anyone can suggest a better title, feel free to let me know. I couldn't really think of one so I just put this one.

Reviews

[Ashley Black]

i think the title is good just the way it is. good write. very beautiful as usual.

[Elvina CZq]

I think the title is perfect in its way for this poem. Don't change a thing. Keep it the way it is.

[Senseless whatever]

Excellent. title fits just fine. The cycle of abuse revealed.

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

DOnt change it Misused Is a perfect title lota ones can Relate to this. Beautiful but very sad god bless

[R.S. Wilder]

Misused is a perfect title - don't change it. It's real - a real situation that a lot of people can relate to (namely, me).

[JENY]

Nice sincere expression of your feelings….
Beautiful…….

[Haifa]

Great poem, it is sad but also wanting things to be alright. Well done.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was good. I think the title Mistreat would be good. I liked the message within the poem. Good job. Thanks for sharing. :)

[deeps]

I really enjoyed this. Wonderful write here

[Ruth]

This is wonderful, a title, I like your's also, maybe, Uncalculated? lol xx