Conquer The World

I've conquered the world
Shoved its nose in the dirt
I've made it well known
I won't be so easily hurt

It spat at me, laughed at me
Threw sticks and stones in my face
But nothing it can do
Will put me out of this race

I'm here for good now
I've taken my stand
I don't care if there's no one
Here to hold my hand

I may get pushed down
Off this rocky mountain side
But I swear I'll get back up
There's only one thing on my mind

I've conquered the world
There's no more stopping me
No matter what they say
I will be who I want to be

Reviews

[Ashley Black]

very well done. very powerful good display of emotions and as always very beautifully formed keep it up

[Jessica Mai]

I enjoyed this write. Well done.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this is really good. I like it a lot. Thanks for sharing. :)

[WriterSki7]

Five stanzas, fourlines each; ABCB rhyme. This was a refreshing chapter simply saying you are whatever you set your mind to be. Determination and grit are key. Now the poem itself is good. Nice choice of words and fair flow; well done.

[Dutch Jr.]

Utterly beautiful... the tone of determination, the rough emotion you write with, everything. It's entertaining to read. And you're exactly right, you can be whoever you want to be in this world. No matter what it hurls at you.

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

i totally agree with what Drock0211 said lots strength lota determination and like your not giving up very strong willed. nice work

[JENY]

This poem shows entirely a different paradigm of your mind….
Really a transfer from self pity ……to self assurance and confidence…..
Good….I liked it…..

[Doreen]

There is such a strength in this piece. Determination in the face of it all. Very nicely said. I like this.

[R.S. Wilder]

A very positive poem. Another excellent write. Great job!!!