A Dull Shine

Well I thought it was cute

I live on a planet made of diamonds

you’re stuck on a globe of stone

I’ll trade you, rock for rock

then we’ll both head home alone. 

In a world dull as yours, 

you could use a little shine

but I could use a little dull

in a home as bright as mine

Reviews

[Death's Poet]

This is so good! I love the flow and the rhyming scheme, This poem is absolutely adorable! loooove it

[Cagan]

Thank you!

[Jamestown]

Simple but creative, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!