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Piece of time held

Hostage for

Others to enjoy

The day I got a photo of my true love to cherries

Over and over again I now have that small piece of her I can take with me

Author's Note

hey i hate having my photo taken and so duse my gf but she finealy gave me 2 photo's of her i m soo hapy plz coment

Reviews

[Pj]

aww! this is so good! At first it sounded sad because you spoke of time- in reference to death and of our mortality...but then it made me think of love when you wrote 'cherries'...like a woman giving herself not just in a photo but physically..

A wonderful write and it holds so much meaning because I know you and your girlfriend :D

[Bryce Chambers]

I really liked this. it's dense, like a good poem should be.

[Erin Was Here.]

This is beautiful! I love the acrostic style.
My favorite line (well, 2 lines, actually):
Piece of time
Held hostage..

Nice poem.