phantom strings

PHANTOM STRINGS
a murmuration of starlings

grounded into earthlings
clocked in and clipped wings
gravity and the weight it brings...
a wreck of birds thrown into this sea
sucked into whirls and pools of catastrophe
hypnotized by the persistence of memory
chasing the costly, instead of letting things be...

Reviews

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

Really great style here I like it.. it is different and the words all stand powerfully punctuating eachother..very good stuff ..

[Last Lying Look]

This is short yet very lovely.
"a wreck of birds thrown into this sea
sucked into whirls and pools of catastrophe"
Amazing line.
This write is fantastic but personally I find that the font you have chosen takes away from the poem a little.
Excellent write overall!
-Elissa :)

[Lunar Pup]

This is a short piece but it is really beautiful and simple with a beautiful skeam of words that you rarely see its very unique.