Sunflower You

Sunflower You

A Poem by Broken Soul

Those vibrant florets proudly displayed for the world to see
Each one radiating a warmth paralleled by only the sun
Synthesizing the most basic of things into tranquil beauty
You command attention no matter the direction you face
Stem and leaves of shamrock green, strengthening with time
Your head remains high no matter the weight of the world
Withstanding the seasons to come, you embrace a challenge
Knowing that should you fall you will rise again a stronger you

© 2025 Broken Soul


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I always love seeing something new from you pop up even if I am late getting around to it. I'll just have it sitting around open on my computer as a reminder for a truly obnoxious amount of time but hey, here I am and it's like a reward.
Your command of language is just so captivating here. A sunflower was such a good choice as well. I don't know if regal is quite the right word for a flower but there's something very regal about them and they're very resilient as well. It's hard to miss sunflowers because they do kind of stand out, but sometimes that's almost what makes you forget how remarkable they can be. Whether the flower itself or a symbol, this was a beautiful tribute.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Broken Soul

3 Months Ago

Always love to hear from you. Thanks



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I always love seeing something new from you pop up even if I am late getting around to it. I'll just have it sitting around open on my computer as a reminder for a truly obnoxious amount of time but hey, here I am and it's like a reward.
Your command of language is just so captivating here. A sunflower was such a good choice as well. I don't know if regal is quite the right word for a flower but there's something very regal about them and they're very resilient as well. It's hard to miss sunflowers because they do kind of stand out, but sometimes that's almost what makes you forget how remarkable they can be. Whether the flower itself or a symbol, this was a beautiful tribute.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Broken Soul

3 Months Ago

Always love to hear from you. Thanks
The description you used in this is enchanting! I truly loved it! Wonderfully done!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 3, 2025
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Broken Soul
Broken Soul

Edmond, OK



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