Escaping Reality

Waist deep in slumber with glistening eyes,

Her sorrow fades under erasing her cries,

 

As her mind creates pictures of bliss and delight,

Of oceans so clear under star sprinkled nights,

 

She is twirling with wind as it speeds through the grass,

Under sunshine so warm and a sky clear like glass,

 

As her mouth parts to shriek she feels warmth on her skin,

And her smile makes everything perfect as she spins,

 

And this world is now hers and she spins once again,

As she's turning around she finds peace and a friend,

 

He runs quickly and happy to see her for now,

Running faster than his legs will even allow,

 

And their bodies collide full of thick hope and bliss,

They exchange little whispers and one perfect kiss,

 

Now the world seems to stop and she cries out for more,

But the image is frozen broken off by a snore,

 

She awakens to sorrow she screams in the sheets,

With her face down again urging just one more dream,

 

But the darkness escapes her, she no longer sees,

Her fairytale world where she escapes reality.

Reviews

[smalltownsympathies]

Wow, your perceptions and descriptions of this terrifying world truly shook the floor beneath me. You are gifted.

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I think this is one poetic write. I really enjoyed this write. This write has class.

[Frantzuu]

Great piece of writing, I like the picture it puts in my head, :D

[ChristopherPoet]

Reading "twirling with wind" made me feel dizzy, beautiful words and imagery, an enchanting dream.

[Ourebro.]

Nice.
Excellent write.

[<3beneathstars;]

WOW.
I don't even know what to say right now besides that, so i'll say it again.
WOW.
my favorite part is 'she awakens to sorrow she screams in the sheets, with her face down again, urging just one more dream'

THAT'S AMAZING.
you have no idea.
you're terrific.