ONE

The One - YOU knew I was... the One - WE are...

One

 

ONE Love... This we have created - ONE.
Living in the moment, looking into the next...
We grow stronger in a faith that most do not
experience.
We keep our hands on this world - we own it.
Looking into the sky, those stars immense oblivious,
we are their keepers.
We are ONE, this Love above and beyond any previous.
Consider the source never forget... Life Partners.
Let the waves wash out - reach for the Mountain Tops...
Creating everything new... the future - we use the past.
My Love is an Eternal Fire... engulfed.
Embrace our fulfillment...
Carry me...
Fill me...
I am your mirror reflection.

 

Copyright ©2008  Candida Dawne Colson

 

Author's Note

I am intrigued... please do give me honesty.

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Lovely, Candi.. a beautiful poem and nicely written.. I would love a love as this, we all would..
It also reminded me of U2 One.. one love but we're not the same we've got to carry each other, carry each other.. of course they are talking brotherly and sisterly love..
God poem.

Chloe
xoxo

[R. Gene MacDonald]

We grow stronger in a faith that most do not experience.

We keep our hands on this world � we own it.

In love we feel we do won it all, and could do anything, I know waht you mean, and nicely put.

[Natalie C]

Oh wow Candi, this is soooo beautiful. I really loved your flow... your brilliant words came washing over me like the eternal waves of our life's ocean.

I simply loved

I am your mirror reflection

What a beautiful sentence.
Left me speechless.
Great piece, thanks for sharing!

[Literary Queen Na Tasha..]

This is intense love poem...Good write!

[Ice QueenJen]

great poem candi!

[Alex]

It seems that we are all feeling this shift in energy of late. the need to unite to stop the dark from falling in .I hear you .and yes we are all one .I am my brothers keeper because he is me !

[Alistair Canlin]

Again a good structure. If I remember rightly the word I'm looking for is tambur (don't know if I spelt it right?), but all your piece have this in spades. A flow, a pace and rythymn.
Keep up the good work.

[Crazy Cat Man]

very cute and nice :)

[Robert Luna]

Wonderful write. Very interesting to see you blossom into a new person in life and writing. You have once again written a wonderful piece and I am sure the person it is about feels honored.



Great Job!!!

[Tomás Ó C..]

To be one for life is the idea od love