Two Equals We

Uninhibited and unscriptied... Relax and enjoy - sink into a comfortable old chair and recall a time when life had a meaning as powerful as love... eternity - eternally - equivalent

Two Equals We

 

 

Living inside each other, we know what we feel.
Passions… majestic… creation, feels so surreal.
Soar to new heights, a beautiful Mountain View.
Every moment given to us, we discover something new.

Hand in hand embraces, deeply emotions grow.
No words left unspoken, each other WE do know.
We've been given the gift of one, an equivalent of two.
As once - a million times spoken, I am you.

Attempt to dust away, the residual effect.
Set aside the consequences, this now - we'll neglect.
Word searching warriors, we are spiritual no doubt.
Hand to heart, with these words we will never be without.

Climb that hill; we'll see the massive valley below.
Fate has brought us to this point, like ink on paper - flow.
We live in today, moving forward to forever.
Love; it grows of magnitude, until the 'twelfth of never'.

Author's Note

Did it take you there? One can only pray.

Reviews

[Natasha Ashway]

Almost... Maybe I was caught up absorbing the rythym of the words. I loved the first four lines, waited to feel the beat again and didn't, but was compensated with the flourishing brush stroke of the clever last one, '...until the twelfth of never.'
Nice work.

[Ice QueenJen]

I felt like I was soaring through the skies and viewing earth. This was a lovely poem and well written, flawless to me.

[Sheila Marie Carr]

Nice poem and you are right love does grows of magnitude, If only everyone can see it that way then we all can climb that hill.

[Marie]

The idea of nature combining with love has been imagined by all. This poem really intertwines and all, making a captivating read and a delight to think that there really is something that can be endless.

[Ahmad Alhour]

Wow, I cannot stop imaging green hills and mountains rounding my sight!
As I said, your poetry is a lovely one and I really and honestly enjoy reading it...
Looking forward to read more of you!

Best regards,
Belial.

[Wildecat]

Well written, very nice use of words, well done.

[Kenneth Lopez]

Well written..."We live in today, moving forward to forever" very nice.

[San Herman Lopez a.k.a...]

Very nice piece... You have a nice way of playing with words.

[Amy]

beautiful poem!

[Amy..... "sing To ..]

My favorite line... "I am you"

beautiful...I'm t here.

amy