A Twilight Melody

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Roar of the wind racing in a seeming halt.
A sudden rainstorm it is.
A salutation farewell to a mournful of two hearts,
Which formerly fused with love and cherish.

All the trees shed their leaves.
As they feel canticles of the broken hearted.
Sing delighted now is the devil,
For he sees another soul to seduced.

Shortly afterward in time to come,
There were a lover lying lifeless.
Covered with the golden leaves of ferns.
An evening, with poems and songs and death.

Reviews

I always love pieces about seasons, and nature, and this one was great to read my friend... you write so beautiful. I wonder how the trees look at my beloved country right now :)

Here they are just like your picture.
You feel the season well, thank you for this nice write.

- Elisa

[Neon]

I loved these pretty cool lines ..
All the trees shed their leaves.
As they feel canticles of the broken hearted...
Very nice poem .. you've proved now that "Music's really your life and poetry's your pretty cool soul"..
Keep on.

[wunder]

~“Covered with the golden leaves of ferns.
An evening, with poems and songs and death.”~

~the beautiful-somber autumn~ :)

[SyberRose]

a sad and melancholy piece...very unique Shirley...powerful emotive read...Rose..hugs

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning great poetry...:)

[StoryTellerWriter]

and the devil goes his way
find souls enough for the day
and tomorrow he might come your way
with music, laughter and temptations to sway