Drowned Memories

Random, I guess...

My window's fogging up,

making it all so hard to see.

I have the music playing loud,

so I can drown out my memories.

Thought's go back to you,

though, I'd kill for them not to.

I hate how I feel

when you first come into my view.

Since the past is history,

what is tomorrow's mystery?

Author's Note

Thoughts? Comments? Suggestions?

Reviews

[nevershoutnever.]

@A. Bennett- Thanks. I read a quote similar to the last two lines and came up with this. I realize that, about the apostrophe, thank you, though. Thank you :)

[A. Bennett]

I liked this a lot, especially the last two lines. It has a very pleasant rhyme scheme and interesting rhythm. 'Thought's' doesn't need an apostrophe though, but other than that there's nothing I can suggest. It's a great piece. :)