Willow My Soul is Sad

When I was younger
If I ever was
Life was different
Life was simple, but
On toward adulthood
We all
Marched
Young
So young
On and on we went
Uknowingly dropping innocence
Leaving it where it fell
I look back now
Seeing the prints left behind
Seeing missed opportunities
Always wondering
Did we do the right thing?

Reviews

[Kara Emily Krantz]

"Unknowingly dropping innocence
Leaving it where it fell"

fantastic. :) i really liked this write. it hit me where it counts - definitely brought up issues buried within, but in a good way. in a 'oh yeah...' way :)