sharks

sharks

A Poem by carynolivia

People tell me all the time
'there's plenty more fish in the sea'
but there are sharks and they're circling;
tearing me apart at the seams,
telling me I shouldn't bleed
in an ocean full of killers.

© 2014 carynolivia


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The mating game is sort of pathetic, though at the right time, certain fish seem so amazing!

Again, I think the opening 2 lines could be a series of poems, could lead into many worthy explorations of dating and the pursuit of intimacy in poetic form.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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The mating game is sort of pathetic, though at the right time, certain fish seem so amazing!

Again, I think the opening 2 lines could be a series of poems, could lead into many worthy explorations of dating and the pursuit of intimacy in poetic form.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You make an excellent point in this.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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 Added on January 20, 2014
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carynolivia
carynolivia

Inverkeithing, Fife Region, United Kingdom



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Aspiring writer currently studying in Glasgow. Looking to expand my horizons when it comes to creative writing as prose fiction tends to be my forte. Have recently discovered a love of poetry and hop.. more..