Mirror Mirror

It's simple but I think it's effective.

Mirror Mirror
Who is this girl I see?

Mirror Mirror
I don't like what's staring back at me

Mirror Mirror
Is this just my Destiny?

Mirror Mirror
Is this all I can possibly be?

Mirror Mirror
I don't feel in control or free

Mirror Mirror
Crack and shatter before me

Mirror Mirror
Help, I've lost all sense of my identity.

Author's Note

Please let me know what you think, even if you think it's rubbish :)

Reviews

[Aoife Kelly]

repitition ,rhyme .Its like a sad spell.It sounds pretty and I feel it.

[Stefanie Holmes]

This is not rubbish at all! I really liked the concept behind the piece and a lot of people can relate to this. Well done!

~Stefanie

[Tai Ryens]

Rubbish? Not at all! I'd say this articulates quite nicely the thoughts you have of yourself and the feeling of not being yourself. Well done.

[caseymichelle31]

Aw, thank you very much :)