Flightpath

Playing with haiku

Lunar reflections

shimmer on ocean's dark cloak,

flightpath to heaven

Reviews

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To me sounds like something beautiful tranquil like the sun shining of a morning in a cloud that burst in rays :)

[Chris Shaw]

It can be whatever you want it to be Jon. For me it was the image of moonlight, forming a pathway on the sea. It was heavenly indeed.

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I know that's the beauty of poetry:) yours sounds pretty awesome as well but I haven't been around an ocean enough to know that beauty but I'd like to have.

[Chris Shaw]

You would remember it if you had seen it. Something I will never forget. You take care Jon

[CutlerStark]

This was a great Haiku and thank you for giving me love on my poem too

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much. You are most welcome

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. You said everything needed in so few words. Thank you Christine for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Chris Shaw]

Glad you liked it. Hope the imagery got through and thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

It did and you are welcome Christine..

[Pash]

Simply sweet and beautiful!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you David for commenting on my haiku. Much appreciated. I am new here too.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

beautiful Haiku...
a lovely image here.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Jacob. Yes, tried to create some strong imagery with this one.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I love it, Christine. Haiku's are so cool to write, allowing you to be truly creative!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Kelly. Every now and again I'll come up with one.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

What a lovely haiku - riding on a moonbeam to heaven - now that's traveling ... excellent ... :-)

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much for your time.