Gratitude

A breakthrough, what those moments can do for you.

So unexpected through the maze

and from the confines of her bed,

at last a pathway clears the haze.

Was it something that I said,

that made her stretch to touch my hand?

Her head leaned forward, not a word,

I heard her laughter as it broke.

Through all the smoke that fogs her mind,

the unkind battles she has fought.

I never thought once more I'd see,

my Mother's eyes smile back at me.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This is so beautiful. I can see and understand it clearly. It hit home on a personal level too as I remember my own mother's days of rare lucidity when she could find her way through the fog. It's like watching a flower bloom right in front of your eyes. So touching. F.

[Chris Shaw]

When the fog clears, what a joy that can be. Thank you Fabian for your thoughts.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

A Mothers Smile as her Eyes see you as a flower unfolding...
A Gift to cherish as you face all the tomorrows. tenderly, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear Pat. A gift indeed. A lovely memory to ponder on in the years ahead. Hope you and Roger are faring well across the waters and enjoying some spring sunshine. Have a great week-end.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

Thanks Chris... our City has so many Cherry Blossom trees with pale Pink blossoms... even with the Rain on many days and nights... they just kept blooming. Perhaps a lesson in survival... to just keep blooming.
Roger still has dialysis three days a week. We have a Vascular Institute here in Fredericksburg, Virginia... that keeps the Fistula for dialysis healthy and functioning. After four years using his right arm... now they will place a new Fistula in his left arm.
The expertise is amazing... as every Patient is unique.
Enjoy Spring and the Songs on Wing. gently, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Your cherry blossom blessings sound amazing. Such a pretty time of year. Wishing the very best for both you and Roger always. In my thoughts you are and frequently.

Chris

[Tate Morgan]

I’m sure my own mother will go out one day saying that I need to iron my pants or something else frivolous. Vanity will follow her to the end. Be what you can to her while she’s here. There should be no regrets in the end

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Tate. This is an old poem out for an airing. My mum has since died, but this moment remains a most beautiful memory. Thank you for stopping by to share your thoughts. Hope all is well with you and yours.

Chris

[Tate Morgan]

All is well thank you

[Chris Shaw]

Good to hear. Happy weekend to you.

[Lydia Shutter]

Oh, Chris, this is heartbreaking. How I wish I could see my mother's smiling green eyes and hear her laughter once more. This moment is a treasure for you...and for her too. Beautifully written. Lydi***

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear Lydi**. A treasured memory for me for sure. Not something I will ever forget. Pleased I poemed it :)

Chris

[Cassie]

Helllo Chris, nice to read this

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much Cassie. All the best.

Chris

[Miss Sharon]

Such a moving write Chris. (I never thought once more I'd see, my Mother's eyes smile back at me.) I remember the day I went to visit my Mother in the nursing home and she didn't know who I was. That was THE worst day of my life. I'm sorry you had to experience some of these same things with your Mom. ~Sharon

[Chris Shaw]

Sharon, I thank you dear poet for your understanding. A lovely review you have left me.

read moreSharon, I thank you dear poet for your understanding. A lovely review you have left me.

Chris

[lightsong]

What one will say here dear Chris? only those who have the ability to feel the other realms will know, understand and feel what You've written here. the profound experience You showed us with an open heart. She loves You immensely... I know she does. You leave me with a warm tear of beauty and gratitude too. Bless You Beautifully❤️

[Chris Shaw]

Your encouraging review lightsong leaves such warmth. So pleased that you stopped by. All good wishes.

Chris

[Lathen Griffiths]

A very beautiful poem Chris, heartwarming.

Lathe

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Lathe for your visit. You are appreciated.

Chris

[Cherrie L Bill]

I was my mother's caregiver and I was grateful that I could be. Like a woman with a newborn I never left her side. Moments most dear to me and I see them here in your poem.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear Cherrie for your understanding. You are aporeciated.

Chris

[Betty Hermelee]

A soft heartfelt ode to your mom Chris... I know you took her death very hard and I'm very sympathetic; It's difficult to see someone suffer ( my mom too).... at the same time, we want peace and comfort for them, but still painful to let go....I like the "the pathway clears the haze" she was able to touch reach out with a laugh, how loving and emotional is that. Tears to my eyes.
Stay strong dear Chris.
Truly, B

[Chris Shaw]

A rare breakthrough when my mum was alive. I got one a week before she died. She was with me totally for an hour. It was a gift. Thank you dear Betty.

Chris

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome dear Chris

[DidIWriteThat]

Wow this is touching, one of my friends is losing her mom to Alzheimer's, and some days this is all she wants...just to see her mother smile as she recognizes her daughter one last time...

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for your lovely review. Most appreciated.

Chris