Equilibrium

Equilibrium

A Poem by Chris Shaw
"

we all need balance in our lives

"
cling to your emotional hurts
as though life depends on them
at your loving heart's peril
for nothing will be gained but
misery within your own fragile
harbour walls

far better those hurts recede with 
ebb and flow of season's tides
let them wash away, let them play
in a bay of happiness with dolphins
let them walk on a pebbled beach
within reach of sunset cafe
where a pumpkin latte served with
dark chocolate almonds can lift
the heaviest of doldrum spirits

or alternatively build a fire in 
your mind's eye, let them burn
let the ashes of your misery
whirl with the wind of freedom
dust to dust, let them be gone
so the song of you shall be
cleansed and inner peace restored

amen

© 2020 Chris Shaw


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i wish it were that easy....seems sometimes our regrets of past rise from the fire like a phoenix and fly in our face once more.
love the imagery in this.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

It isn't easy is it Jacob? That's why I have to keep reminding myself to let them wash away to make .. read more
Fabulous piece of writing! We need cleansing from time-to-time, we need to rid ourselves of baggage of hurt, pains and disappointments. What a better way than at the beach, with dolphins, latte and dark chocolate almonds. More better, if we can build that fire - burn our miseries and pain away. Such beautiful descriptions here. Such an apt topic - balance/equilibrium in our lives. I loved reading this write of your Chris. Thank you very much!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Dear Abhi, thank you for such a thorough review. Pumpkin latte and chocolate almonds are exceedingly.. read more
A.H.

5 Years Ago

You're very welcome, Chris. True that, sugar high :):)
I can definitely go for the Sunset Cafe, serving pumpkin latte, with dark chocolate almonds!
Reservations needed??

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Hello Dave. I would say in normal times, no reservations, but in virus times, yes. Kira wants to co.. read more
Dave Brown

5 Years Ago

B rt. there
Many thanks John. It can be a prayer, if I want it to be :) But hey, it is wise counsel too and I do appreciate your review.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


Not sure this is so much a prayer as a wise counselling session as the writer provides a sage warning and then offers maritime visions to soothe the soul!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Look further up John. My response in the wrong box :)

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Added on September 24, 2020
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Chris Shaw
Chris Shaw

Berkshire, United Kingdom



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Albert, my paternal grandfather introduced me to Tennyson when I was nine. I have loved poetry ever since but did not attempt writing a single piece until I was 40. It's never too late to try somethin.. more..