Lift Off

when moody waters wrestle
with darkest swirling thoughts
and whirlpools deep inside your mind
are dreams you never caught
take heed and lift your head up
to gaze where stars are found
and stay there till it’s safe again
to land on kinder ground

Reviews

[Ladysue]

Chris this is a wonderful inspiring poem. It offers hope. A message so profound and universal as we all need this at times ‘take heed and lift your head up to gaze where stars are found’ beautifully said. A great title too. Lift Off indeed. This is a gorgeous poem. Going into my favorites. Utterly beautiful.

[Chris Shaw]

Many thank yous Ladysue for such an uplifting review. You have made my day. All good wishes.

Chris

[Pauline]

Awe Chris, this is so inspiringly beautiful.(I'm uplifted already.)
P.
Hope all's good at your end.x

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear Pauline. All reasonable, hope life is being kind to you. Pleased you stopped by. Take care of yourself.

Chris 🌹

[Jimmy Crapped Corn]

What a great poem, Chris this is excellent

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you kindly Danny. Pleased you enjoyed my words. All the best to you.

Chris

[Pete]

great imagery with a positive message. we mustn't let the weeds take root in the fertile soil of our minds. nicely said.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Pete for your thoughtful review. Hope all is good with you.

Chris

[alexAlexander]

Great encouraging word for a wounded soul. To find our gaze where the stars are found.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much for stopping by.

Chris

[alexAlexander]

U are so, so welcome. Keep creating.

[A.H.]

thoughtful, spiritual and meaningful. so much to take away in this write. felt richer in mind and soul after reading this. we all need that Lift off to to see the stars and enjoy the sights, feel happier, safer and land on the ground reassured. thanks for sharing this wonderful poem, Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you my friend for such a positive review. Very much appreciated. Pleased you enjoyed my poem.

Chris

[Jimmy Crapped Corn]

Inspiration!! Bravo I liked this alot

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Danny. Pleased you enjoyed. All good wishes.

Chris

[Desert Knave]

I like this. I think we all need some place we can go to when the thoughts we have are a little too much to deal with. ~Jim

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks Jim. I appreciate your thoughts. All good wishes.

Chris

[LisaCarol]

Oh Chris, this is so beautiful. I will definitely save this one and read it again and again. Bravo! Exceptional work as usual.

[Chris Shaw]

Your review dear LisaCarol lifts my heart. Thank you so much for stopping by. All best wishes.
read moreYour review dear LisaCarol lifts my heart. Thank you so much for stopping by. All best wishes.

Chris

[Relic]

I'm surprised I missed this one. There's a ton of wisdom in your words, Chris. I've been going through a bout of depression lately and I'm glad I saw this on the live page.

It's tough sometimes to get into a more positive vibe, but I think with some meditation it can be done. Great poem.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you my friend. Sorry to hear you have been suffering. Hope that black dog lifts and you start to feel better soon. Not a good place to be. Always good to have a visit from you. Take care.

Chris

[Soren]

This is not only good advice but poetically beautiful and linguistically satisfying. Very nicely done Chris

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much Soren. Pleased you enjoyed my efforts here. All best wishes.

Chris

[Dave]

Chrisn- so often we ignore the beauty that surrounds us. In stead we come to believe that the horror is all the exists. You inspire us to look for the brightness of the day instead of the gloom of night.
Thank and best wishes - Dave.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Dave. We live in dark troubling times and yet there is light and beauty if we care to look. I appreciate your thoughts my friend. All the best to you and yours always.

Chris