Blessings

look into the open heart
of a camellia in full bloom

what do you see within
the strata of soft silk perfection

a loveliness like a chirping bird at dawn
the glory of a new spring morning

a warning that life is fleeting
and that all too soon too soon

the raindrop nested tween petals
of a fine full skirted red dress

will let out a sigh at the
inevitable downturn and demise

yet even in death the old paving
is blessed with its gentle petal fall

scattered crimson confetti
tinctured with a fringe of decay

Reviews

[Archishman Rick]

Good evening. It was wonderful to read your poem, Chris. The metaphors applied here are beautiful to say the least. I feel this captures the priceless worth of natural gifts set in impermanence. Beauty that decays, yet while doing so grants reality's wisdom, showing the glory of the cycle of life and death. I understand that the comforting spring season has come into bloom in your parts, and hope that you bask in its delight. Where I am though, the blazing tropical summer has already set in, with temperatures of 40 C being commonplace now, haha.
Cheers, Rik.

[Chris Shaw]

Hello Rik, your 40 C would literally kill me:) I much prefer cooler climes. Thank you so much for your comments. I appreciate you stopping by to share your thoughts. All the best.

Chris

[Soren]

A gentle poem on what many see as a dark subject but what I prefer to see as you as a natural process that can be as beautiful as all of the rest. I sensed a calmness in reading this poem and felt how even in leaving this existence that petal we leave behind, in memories, written words, or other art can be beautiful and a vision to others. A great message said so tenderly and poetically

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Soren, thank you for your time. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts here. Know you are appreciated. Have a great Sunday.

Chris

[The_Ancient_Rock]

Time devours all...
Some say it is a cycle of death and rebirth.
As nature goes through change and seasons.
Yet nature can have beauty in all forms, even in decay.
A touching poem.
Blessings.

[Chris Shaw]

You are so right. Even in decay there is beauty. Thank you so much for another review Ancient Rick. I appreciate your visit.

Chris

[The_Ancient_Rock]

You are welcome. Take good care. Have a nice weekend.

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous work Chris. Great use of language and imagery.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Thomas. Have a great weekend.

Chris

[Papaya]

A beautiful softness in your words brings a lovely peaceful feeling this morning.
Blessings indeed, nature's treasures. Lovely poetry from you, Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much Ana for your kind words. Know you are appreciated. Have a lovely weekend.

Chris

[Pete]

words cannot do this delicate beauty justice. soulful just like the blessings bestowed.

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Pete, thank you for your encouraging review. Our camellia this year has been magnificent. It deserved a poem. Pleased you liked it. Have a happy Friday.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

This reminds me of a Neil Diamond song..."Being done too soon"---
beautiful poem and yes, life is fleeting and many of us don't realize that enough.
We still don't appreciate what we have while we have it....enough.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you j. I listened to the Neil Diamond song. Very upbeat and yes it reminds us all of those famous names who have come and gone. Also Love reminder of the people we love and hold dearest and the fear of losing them. I am no stranger to death and the aftermath. I like your thoughts here dear j.

Chris