Moments

watch sunbeams play on water

with laughter in their eyes

remember little children

the ones that don’t survive

my arms reach out to hug them

too soon those moments gone

a cloud has drifted in the way

and blocked out all the sun

Reviews

[ShadesofV]

brief as a breath, yet filled with love and loss. The fading sunbeam becomes a gentle symbol of children gone too soon, and the closing cloud lingers like grief itself. A tender, heart-aching poem

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving me such wonderful words. Most appreciated ShadesofVlue.

Chris

[Lydia Shutter]

Oh this is just heartbreaking, Chris. As someone who suffered through five miscarriages, I identified with not being able to hug the children I felt I already knew. Heartfelt words. Lydi**

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Lydi**. I am so sorry for your losses. There are many who will relate. Thank you so much for gracing my page with your lovely presence.

Chris

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Life is short, that is why it is important to make precious moments with loved ones, but also treasure them.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much Dale. I appreciate you visit and the thoughts you shared. Pleased you stopped by.

Chris

[Soren]

A sad poem that reminds me of James Blunt's song (The girl that never was) The poem carries with it a weight and darkness that covers the sun

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much Soren. . I wasn’t familiar with the James Blount song. Looked up the lyrics and was pleased I did. So beautifully composed and heart breaking with it. The loss of a child is certainly a heavy weight eclipsing the sunlight.

Chris

[Soren]

Written from his personal experience as was his son Monsters about the terminal illness of his father it touches hearts of listeners. You are most welcome Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Going back to listen to the song. I just read the lyrics before. Thank you so much for the background.

[Neville]

.. My heart truly goes out to all those parents who endure the agony of a child born sleeping .. My own sister has been there over thirty years back and sadly still grieves for JJ .. Your words here are filled with understanding and compassion that throw light on the dark place so many are forced to endure ..

Neville 💜

[Chris Shaw]

I am so sorry for your sister and the loss of JJ, Neville. The loss of children is the hardest of all to bear, a wound that doesn’t heal with time. Thank you for your words today.

Chris 💜

[RomaJ]

This poem lingers in the quiet ache of fleeting beauty. I love how the simple image of sunlight becomes a vessel for memory and loss. It's tender, fragile, and haunting all at once.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much RomaJ for sharing your thoughts on this short write. Truly beautiful and appreciated.

Chris

[Ayesha Faiz]

This is a beautiful and touching poem. It feels gentle and sad at the same time. The words are simple, but the meaning is deep. You captured a strong feeling in just a few lines—well done!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear Ayesha. Yes, simple words but deep meaning. You have understood this poem and the emotions well. Have a beautiful weekend.

Chris

[Ayesha Faiz]

Wish you a warm and blessed weekend as well dear Chris.
Stay well and be safe!
Regards,

[alexAlexander]

To hold these moments in transition is a remarkable thing. As the cloud drifts by, we will remember the children who don't survive. With tears in our eyes.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much Alex for your visit and sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated.

Chris

[alexAlexander]

You are welcome. Enjoyed.

[red93]

Fabulous Work Chris - were you thinking of the children in the current War Zones in Gaza and Ukraine? Absolutely heart-breaking. Exceptional ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Tony. I was thinking of many children in many situations of conflict throughout our world. I appreciate your thoughtful response.

Chris

[Lara]

The sea has a way of slipping from our fingers, always. Even from sunbeams. So, too, those precious gems of children.

I especially like this writing, Chris- how it effortlessly carries such layers. 🙏

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much for your encouraging words Lara.

Chris