Gold On Grey

when sun illuminates sky’s winter grey
to cast a golden gleam on crystal sea
it raises spirits wrapped in warm dressed clothes
a treasure chest of jewels for all to see

like diamond dust that sparkles cluster bright
said gems a given gift to mesmerize
they can not fail to please it’s nature’s way
a feast for all with tired weary eyes

how lifting is the prize of dazzling light
a chance to watch the dance on salty waves
the rays are like a tonic sent to heal
escape from mindsets troubled darkest caves

how fine these moments are for us to hold
when breakers rolling in are kissed with gold

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

The sea waves certainly are lovely to watch in any season or type of weather. I really enjoyed your poem; very nicely expressed and described for the reader. Rainy and cold here today, just a gloomy sort of half-frozen misery. It's only about two degrees above the freezing mark but the rain feels like ice water pouring down from the clouds. Always a pleasure to read your poems, F.

[Chris Shaw]

Hello Fabian. It’s very cold here too at the moment. Looking forward to seeing some signs of spring. Thank you so much for your kind thoughts about my poem. Have a happy Friday. Hope all is good in your world.

Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Chris.
"how fine these moments are for us to hold
when breakers rolling in are kissed with gold."
Same here in Michigan. We get the orange and purple sky sometimes. My favorite thing to see. When the sun falls and the lake/trees create a perfect painting. Hello dear friend and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Coyote for your kind thoughts. An orange and purple sky must be wonderful to see. Michigan sounds wonderful. So pleased you liked this poem. Have a Good Friday.

Chris

[Amy R]

Very very beautiful, the imagery and everything caught me form the first stanza.

It highlights the beauty of nature and its ability to lift spirits, providing solace and joy to those who experience it.

Phrases like "golden gleam," "crystal sea," "diamond dust," and "dazzling light" create a rich visual tapestry, painting a serene and enchanting picture of the natural world. Language and imagery very well put.

I definitely enjoyed this poem.
-Amy

[Chris Shaw]

Another welcome and encouraging review from you Amy. So pleased you enjoyed this poem I wrote about a favourite place. All the best to you.

Chris

[Amy R]

You're welcome. Keep good.

[poetgurl]

This is a wonderful, beautiful write.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much poetgurl for your visit. Pleased you enjoyed this poem. Have a great day.

Chris

[Arundass TP]

I love display of colors on sea waves in the evening while I sit on beach. Great nature poem

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks Arundass for stopping by. I appreciate your thoughts. All the best.

Chris

[Arundass TP]

Welcome friend 😊

[red93]

Like you Chris I rejoice when the Light returns and the days are drawing out. 'When Winter comes, can Spring be far behind?'. Really Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much Tony for your kind words. Have a good day.

Chris

[John the Baptist]

Light is a precious commodity in winter, the dark season. In this offering we have not only the sun's light, but its gemlike reflection on the waves of the sea. Excellent natural therapy in the dead of winter. And it's free.

[Chris Shaw]

Many thanks John and I agree, light is an excellent therapy. Have a good Monday.

Chris

[Lorry]

Winters sun can be so beautiful, but I always feel like a proper twonk rocking around scotland in shades when it's silly degrees.
It does be making everything so purty though, the fresh laid snow twinkles and glistens and if you catch the angles just so, can turn mountains with a fresh dusting into the world's biggest sparkler.
Just mind your slippers and hot choc when you get home to propellorly thaw out!

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Lorry. Nothing like a bit of sunlight in winter to lift the spirits. And as you say, it costs nothing and looks so very pretty. Have a good Monday.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the rays of the sun really are a tonic....and they can warm our insides until our spirits melt with the joy.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Dear j, sunlight, such a tonic, I agree. A medicine for winter blues. Many thanks for your thoughts.

Chris

[Martiya Daman]

Wow, this poem makes me think of a beautiful winter day by the sea! The way the light turns everything from grey to golden is so magical. I loved how it made me feel peaceful and happy. Beautiful and Charming, Chris. Keep going.

Martiya

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Martiya, thank you so much for your lovely review. I very much appreciate your thoughts.

Chris

[Martiya Daman]

My pleasure! Happy Mondays!