Love

Love

A Poem by Ashley
"

The feeling of being in love

"

I hold you tight

Through the night

Forever in my sight

Our love is strong

You may just be the one

© 2010 Ashley


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So sweet,pink color increases its strength more:)
love four letter word with a lot of meaning:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


a sincere piece..
but I find it lacking lines..
hmm.. more details I guess..
but that's just me..

good job anyway..

Posted 15 Years Ago


Sweet, short, sincere! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is sweet and insightfully stunning. I like the pink, it shades its self from the white background so people can read it. It's short and it gets right to the point. :)

*Two thumbs up*

~S. D. Blankenship

Posted 16 Years Ago


Short and sweet.
Good job
=]

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on November 9, 2009
Last Updated on May 28, 2010

Author

Ashley
Ashley

claymont, DE



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Ive been writing for about 6 years now, and I mostly write short stories, poems, and song lyrics. Most of my writing is based on death, and sorrow. I've been pondering about starting to write horror s.. more..