The Moth

Escape

slow strangulation

tight web of my own making

tonight the moth flies

Reviews

[Zugzwang]

Nice haiku. I like the alliteration in the first line and the slant rhyme in the initial couplet. Well crafted.

[Firebird]

Thank you Zeitnot. You see things I don't see. I just write things I like the sound of.

[Zugzwang]

Yar, well, you've got a good ear!

[Firebird]

Haha! Thanks