Exorcised Friendship

Saying Goodbye

I am Lucy the undead,

You never saw my light,

You only saw my darkness,

You drove your stake deep 

To set me free.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

You know this reminded me of a toxic friendship. Absolutely no point in hoping it will work. Some people have that effect on others.

Chris

[Firebird]

Thank you Chris. That is what it was about. Thank you for getting it.

[Firebird]

Yeah. Like a lot of my poems its pretty pretentious sounding I guess. I enjoyed this one though and I meant it.

[V]

I feel this one features a sort of open ending. The images seem highly metaphoric and kind of cinematic at the same time. Nice write.

[Firebird]

Yeah. Like a lot of my poems it's pretty pretentious sounding I guess. I enjoyed this one though and I meant it.

[Zugzwang]

It's hard to lose people, but if the relationship is unhealthy...we do what we have to do.
Time to fly.
z.

[Firebird]

I still can't fly. I cling desperately.

[Zugzwang]

Well, I guess that just means you're human.

[Firebird]

Yup. Attachment equals suffering. Buddhists have it right. That's why I meditate. I am hoping to get there.

[Zugzwang]

I hoo you ger there soon.

[Firebird]

Thanks Z x

[Zugzwang]

Have a good one 😊

[Firebird]

You too! 🌏

[Terry O'Leary]

Free!!
I hope to see you, Lucy, "in the sky with diamonds"....

[Firebird]

Thank you Terry. :-)