The River

Haiku.

The River runs through

Her hair and 

Across her eyes

And I want 

To swim.

Reviews

[Sebastian Falzarano]

Don't really like haikus, but this one does seem really nice.

[Cat]

Thank you very much

[Sebastian Falzarano]

Your very welcome.

[andrew mitchell]

Just beautiful is this remarkable poem

[Cat]

Thank you so much!!

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This is gorgeous poetry !

[Cat]

Thank you!!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

close....the syllable count is right, but might want to get into the three lines, but only if you want a pure haiku...

the wording is lovely....a very romantic theme and superb last two lines...you create such pictures...

[Cat]

I'm aware of the qualifications. I decided to break it up. But thank you for the review!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

as emily dickinson said, "form was meant to be violated" and she did it often.

i am not good at conforming to the rules most often.

[Cat]

I think it's healthy to bend them a bit. Dickinson was wise.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think she was the best poet ever...my favorite...and Plath is second...did my masters thesis on plath and sexton....fascinating women, all three of them...and amazing poets.

[Cat]

MY top three as well!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. My favorite kind. Nature and beautiful eyes. You said a lot in the short poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote