Gummy Bear Love

This is a poem I wrote in creative writing class when we where the teachers; it is about love.

I love a big gummy bear,

He is cute and delicious,

We have been in love for 2 years,

Yesterday was our Anniversary,

Which was on Friday the 13th,

Our love was as true as evil magical bacon,

It is also very much alive,

We had a great Anniversary,

Are supper was good,

And desert was even better,

You wanna know what the desert was,

My Gummy Bear Love,

He was delicious!

Author's Note

Just tell me what you think of it; I know it does not fully make sense but that is the point.

Reviews

[1Disawsum]

aha very funny and great poem! "Are supper is good" Do you mean, 'OUR' supper was good? Just wondering. I love the funniness clear in this poem, "We have been in love for 2 years" great personification in making the gummy bear seem alive! 2nd last line just cracked me up laughing, very funny! Well done! :D

[catney123]

Thank you so much and it should be 'our'; sometimes I get words messed up or I misspell them.

[1Disawsum]

aha no problem! As long as people can still understand what you are trying to say, it should be totally fine!

[Emily]

Such a cute poem! Well done.

[catney123]

Thanks it was really easy to write after I was told I had to write a love poem so I did, and with a twist at the end.