His love

how i feel about my love

I talk to him every night,

Every word I listen close,

I feel his warmth run through my veins,

Never wanting to let him go,

I fall asleep to his voice.

Reviews

[spiritwind]

Hmmm... this could be a earthly love poem or a poem about loving God or both. An intriguing aspect. I like the brevity of this piece~indeed, why write more than you don't have to. You got your point across and faded into the night.

[Castonovia]

Simple, but true to the heart like you can feel the warmth and comfort from hearing this lyrical piece. Loved it, Const ;)