"Migrane!"

Description of feelings during the attack of a Migrane

Migrane!

Assending, grasping

Feeling the pain

Like lava, so hot

Coming over me again

 

Feeling it crawl

At the base of my neck

Bursting into a brawl

Turning me into a wreck

 

Pain so surreal

Cannot comprehend

Cant even feel

This happening again

 

Light is blinding

Intensifying my pain

Sound is Grinding

Feeling insane

 

Migrane takes me in

Occupies my time

Leaving me on a limb

My day put behind

 

Until I fall into limbo

Inability to perform

Any task a cresendo

A terrible scorn

 

Let me fall into sleep

Get away from this burn

Wake me up to reap

A new day to turn

Reviews

[Katherine Wyatt]

the noxious nausea, the throbbing, blinding, vision blurring, persistent ...YES.. been there done that...so well written! You had a wonderful flow here!

[Xyve rrg]

haha, awesome materialization of the migraine dilemma
i dare say it's quite difficult how to put the feeling in words but you did it well
i especially like the 1st, 2nd and last stanzas, probably because that's how it really felt for me.
^_^