Going down...

...so here's my black box.

it amazes me how
your medicinal smile
can lift my heart
or make it stop
the charm and humor
has won me over
even with the strings extracting

 

though it's just icing
on the cake
let's go down for just
a little while
and share this moment
for a moment

 

the pulse in your chest
beats this rhythm
impossible to duplicate
speeding
racing
quicker still
but the only running
that you are doing
is down my chin

 

as eyes lock
and lips meet
I hear the noise
I've longed to hear
gasp
with levitating hips
moan
with trembling limbs

 

after number five
and three of three
the prediction made
on that warm night
in that same bed
is all but fully
fulfilled

Author's Note

The lower case letters and lack of punctuation is intentional... Just saying...

Reviews

[Gandré]

a great lyric text - this expressed a deep emotion and I am aware of it. I liked this: "as eyes lock / and lips meet" -what a way to say. := ) well done, even you are no writer: you are a poet.

[Gastroc.]

woah now. too bad this never happened........

[Shelly Wiseberg]

I enjoyed it. If I feel the words thats what matters the most to me. Shelly

[Legion]

Well I like it. Hope your partner did too. :) Well written.