Smile

I guess they misunderstand 

my down trot face.

The extrovert, she acts,

as if, I am, out of place.

All the while, a smile,

is hidden deep inside. 

-By Eric Weick 

Reviews

[Shadows Ember]

I like the way you wrote this, the flow is very well done, it is something I can relate to, it's something I believe a lot of people can relate to 100% at one point or another. And that's one of those things that really makes poetry what it is and as popular. I think the way you wrote so much without really saying anything at all is remarkable - even something young or new authors might envy you for. Your word choice was so simple, yet it really left an impact.

[Eric Weick]

Thank you Shadows Ember. I just try and write from the heart. Thank you.

[Shadows Ember]

Thats the best thing a writer can do.

[Matching Socks]

Stopped by to read your poem.
Thoughtful and charming. :)

[Eric Weick]

Thank you Ance.