I never existed

 

 

As i feel when my love is gone

The very air itself is gone

Saying that i need you to exist

 

How I breath if you are gone

It becomes a vacuum

My meaning is nonexistence

 

Life and death have no meaning

Cause they do not exist either

Without you my dearest love

 

Reviews

[Imperfection]

i need you to exist...

I can relate to this one completely.
The last stanza is my favorite.

Well written.

[Bhabie]

:)

[justjenn_2u]

This poem has a strong opening.

"Life and death have no meaning
Cause they do not exist either
Without you my dearest love"

Closing the poem with closure, I pull that out.

[STEVEN]

just reading this makes me feel so good...i am there with you...and when i am gone it is as if you were never there...but i feel you with me all the time...you write such lovely poems...dont ever stop...

[thecoolone52]

i mean a little boring... a little cliched........ but i like the vacum cleaner line.... it wasnt terrible... but it was just ok