my depression

all too familiar
the ice tea left out
forgotten found later
to go down the drain

i fear my life melted
has been forgotten
to go down the drain

why is it good to be me

Reviews

[Lexi]

You're life is not forgotten dear, I often feel this way and I understand. Keep writing poems and keep your head up, sounds cliche but one day this will all be over. The comparison to tea was quite creative, very new and interesting :)

[STEVEN]

your life has not gone down the drain honey...you have much to give...you are the most giving person i know...i can say that for sure because you are always here for me...i love you...and you will always be a special giving person...don't think bad of yourself or your life...you are part of my life and i want you always to be here...

[Ron Reardon]

Do I sense dread...or fear in this?

[Bhabie]

no your life is not forgotten