when the man cant

 

i can hear her breathing
she is so asleep now
she is breathing so hard
sounds like music

 

i lay down with her
like magic her breathing
becomes more shallow
the slower breathing is music

 

just the tempo changes
she needs the sleep
for earlier i hear the music
of her in the raptures of moans

 

yet unsatisfied by the man
i know we can make music
and be satisfied in the music
the melody and harmony

 

the music is the goal
so both can benefit
both to be satisfied
rest in the music of sleep

Reviews

[poddar kushal]

"yet unsatisfied by the man
i know we can make music" the beautiful music, some may argue can be made by the union of man and woman but the same may born out of a single spark of passion of one's solitude or even from two girls...

[Wolfwind Words]

What a cool way of bringing the combination of sexual outlet and then exhaustion and sleep together! That was well writen and the images came loud and clear!
Great Job!

[Andy Shae]

wonderful