he met his match

you guys, dont think you can get away with this

what the hell i'm in raged
what the hell makes a man
what the hell hit a woman

damm why does it always
why always across the cheek
always across the cheek bone

i'm in raged he was abusive
since i met him very rough
but he met a bull

when he lashed out
he found he needed
his head examined

he did not know me
my defense was that
of a sting of a scorpion

his broken nose
was the match
to my bruised cheek

all is his memory
is him going over
flipped on his back

this girl dont mess around
when martial arts is concerned
i never back down

 

Author's Note

when i write mad i may get a little sloppy. so let me know if i got sloppy

Reviews

[larryb]

Well done my friend.....

[Cece]

i had to apply heavier makeup to hide my eye now

[A.r. Bazian]

i do not think you're to be messed with gurl!
congratz for a job well done!
about the poem!
its nice!
intense... and full of self confidence and a touch of sarcasm!
i like!

keep it up!

[poddar kushal]

"he did not know me
my defense was that
of a sting of a scorpion" _ i just feel the sting of the words...

[justjenn_2u]

Oh yeah. I love this one. I, too, have been involved in martial arts. 3 years of Tae Kwon Do and 3 years of American Bushido. I see your love of the art in this writing. Self defence pours through in this poem!!!!!